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4月24日

The First Step

A few years back (actually, more than a few, but that's part of any man's  effort to ignore the pasage of time) my favorite poet spent a summer traveling around Europe. His travels resulted in an expansion of his vision of the world,  a cornucopia of experiences to be treasured for a lifetime, and the writing of several works of poetry, some of which I will share with you in this, as well as future blogs. I admit to just a twinge of jealousy as I read of his journey, both for the adventures he lived, as well as for his talent in describing them. But then, the greatest gifts any child can give to a parent is to start off in his footsteps, than rapidly outdistance him with the passing of years. If any of you develop a wanderlust in reading his words, I make no apologies, and wish you bon voyage.
 
the first step
 
on the rim of this bowl
standing with toes out over the edge.
 
the opposite side winks across the distance of three months.
one step will begin the plunge.
two points and a trajectory -
what lies between?
 
probably:
opportunity, hunks of clay, waiting to be molded.
adversity, to be stumbled on like a landmine.
      (but let us hope not an actual landmine)
adventure like a hot wire of chance charged with the current of risk,
or: the balancing of opportunity and adversity,
 
the only certain is the unknown:
a forest of moments
yet seed in the fertile future
waiting for the days and nights
to be born.
 
 
 

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Deborah发表:
Another example of why he is becoming my favorite poet also. Jorge, you are wonderful, and I always love exploring here.
Blessed be
5 月 3 日
lottemae发表:
thanks for sharing the poem by your favorite poet. We as parents can only hope that we rear our children so that the grow up and a way beyond us but yet have wonderful memories and ties to those who like the eagle.... moved them from the nest. hugs, lottemae
5 月 3 日
Holy发表:
A true Renaissance man who has clearly raised another. Poets have the wisest windows on the world, the soul.

And I, too, am waiting the days and nights to be born - we're heading to the Aloha State to renew our vows - 25 years ago this month,, when I was younger than your son was the poet seer in these lovely stanzas, Holy Hub and I met. Raise your wine glass in toast due west next Thursday evening. This time, we are dispensing with that pesky obey word - sadly, it never has come to pass in our marriage. :)
5 月 1 日
Hi Jorge, Lol, I thought you were a woman, but as I see on some comments, you are a man, huh. I am sorry, but what I missed?. Why I thought like that I don't know. Is Jorge a unisex name or what, I don't know... I like the poem of your son. And I am really jelaous for that experiment. It would be great to travel around the world in a bohemian way, and write some poems or something else... Thanks for stopping by. Love and peace, Zeynep xx
4 月 28 日
redvelvet发表:
Ah yes . . . experiencing a twinge of jealousy here myself . . .
Your son is talented indeed . . . in photography and now poetry I see . . .
And through his work and words as well as your own
I feel as if I know you . . . even though face to face we've never met . . .
Strange how this thing called the internet works . . .
Glad you're back.
4 月 25 日
sweeti's发表:
u can be proud Jorge...its so beautiful a dad proud of his son...wow goosebumps
as u are proud of ur son ..his poetry.
im proud of my buddy pety his poetry
we U and me
we are the publicers lol
well i look forward to read poems of ur son.
his name is?

abt the war in sri lanka...well Jorge.
there are so much heroes....in body bags.
pain for parents...pain for families.
Civilwar is soemthing u cant stop...it will stay I wish i could believe better...but i cant
coz i know that the tigers are all over the world
Njoy ur weekend Jorge and
enjoy ur family.
Big smile
MJ
4 月 25 日
pp-vdawn发表:
dear Jorge, i feel your love for your son much
.
.
I see said the blind girl...



Perfection happens.

It is.

You have it now.

Recognize it.


4 月 24 日
Jorge, The very first time I saw the ocean and touched the waters, it was known that I had touched the world. Indeed every day and night is an adventure and a blessing.
As ever be well
4 月 24 日
BGayle发表:
A wonderful description of the beginning of a journey/adventure. Your son is many talented young man!
Nice to see you blogging so soon.
Gayle
4 月 24 日

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